I have added a new tale to the Free Stories section. Not only that, it comes with a competition.
Those readers who have lasted throughout the last year of posts from me will have had dozens of nuggets of wisdom about how to craft good spanking fiction.
For the competition, you have to spot ALL the rules that I broke while composing this story. If you do get to make out a full list, then you can enter it to win a near totally worthless prize. Partial lists, and those that contain rules that were not broken, will be eliminated from the drawing.
May the best nit-picker win!
OK, OK already - I'll give you some hints. There are no scene setting descriptions and the three characters are cyphers - this really is nothing more than a lengthy fragment, not a story. The dialog does not work if you read it out aloud. There are no metaphors or similes ... That should be enough to start you off.
ReplyDeleteShortly after the AtoZ is over, I'll publish a re-write of this tale, to show how a working draft can be toned up. As an exercise in how these things work. On the off-chance that sort of thing piques your interest......